Rhyme for No Reason Contest
Brian Slusher, “Ragged Point”
Honorable Mentions:
Frances Cardwell
Drive California 1 to Ragged Point
and rent a room with a balcony view
of the large lone rock, sea-locked and scoured white,
then watch as the cold waves strain to reduce
it to molecules. But it will hold stead,
despite the harsh breakers ceaseless attack,
and seem almost safe as a child in bed
swathed in a blue crazy quilt to the neck.
What you will take when you turn in your key
and return on the twisting coastal road
won’t be the begging black bird’s hungry plea
or the stoned clerk’s shorting you change you’re owed
but that rugged turret of undressed stone
that weathers the worst yet is so at home.
Ragged Point
Judge’s Comment:
Excellent use of rhymes and near rhymes but I especially love the way the poet works personal, intimate details into the poem.